Thursday, 3 April 2014

First draft of my film



This is the first draft of my film, I didn't make any sub-title because it will cost me a lot of time so I'm afraid I am not able to post on Fri. if I did the sub-title. So the final version will be uploaded next week with sub-title, background soundtrack and some colour corrections.

1 comment:

Jools said...

Yeah the fantasy flashforward imagination scene works well. I liked the visual pallette. the fact that it was so blue.
I like the train station night shot also but don't really get how he found out she was there. this is a new scene right? Some of the spatial geography, around his flat, the phone and when she sees them together after coming in flat doesn't work so well yet also. Good for first draft though