Storyboard of my short film

As this storyboard I have been worked for three whole days since last Friday, but I found some problems of it, I didn't draw on it just writing instead, and I didn't write every exact dialogue on it. Every shot just written by words. Next time I will draw the storyboard instead of words. And sorry about I'm writing in Chinese because I think its easy to express what I want, so I will explain something detail to my tutor on Monday. Here's my storyboard