Tuesday, 18 March 2014

New version of my script


          INT. INSIDE THE BOOTS LIBRARY                                    
                                                                           
          Mike is glancing at the rows of the books.                       
                                                                           
          Mike takes them one by one and picks one of them.                
                                                                           
          Mike walks out of the bookshelves.                               
                                                                           
          Mike glances at the seats beside windows.                        
                                                                           
          Mike walks to there and asks the girl (Mary) the seat is         
          available or not, then he sits down.                             
                                                                           
          Mike begins to read the book he just borrowed.                   
                                                                           
          Mike talks to Mary.                                              
                                                                           
          Mike takes his phone out of pocket and marks down Mary’s         
          phone number. And he phones back Mary                            
                                                                           
          Mary leaves.                                                     
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OLD MARKET SQUARE - DAY (FLASHFORWARD)                      
                                                                           
          Mary opens her arm then hugs Mike strongly.                      
                                                                           
          Mike holds her hand and takes her baggage and they go away.      
                                                                           
          Mary turns around and kisses Mike.                               
                                                                           
                              MARY                                         
                    I love you.                                            
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. INSIDE THE BOOTS LIBRARY                                    
                                                                           
          Mike smiles.                                                     
                                                                           
          Mike leaves the seat.                                            
                                                                           
                                                          DIP TO BLACK     
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. LIVING ROOM - EVENING                                       
                                                                           
          Mike is watching a film on his laptop.                           
                                                                           
          There are many books about Marketing on his desk.                
                                                                           
          The mobile phone alarms and the screen shows "tomorrow is        
          Valentine’s Day".                                                
                                                                           
          Mike pauses the film.                                            
                                                                           
                                                           (CONTINUED)     
                                                                           
          CONTINUED:                                              2.       
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
          Mike presses his mobile phone and sends a text message to        
          Mary                                                             
                                                                           
          Mike begins to smile.                                            
                                                                           
          The screen displays a message from Mary "See u tmr at 3pm in     
          Old market square, p.s. I love you".                             
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. NEWTON BUILDING FIRST FLOOR - DAY                           
                                                                           
          Mike is walking.                                                 
                                                                           
          Mike sees Johnny standing beside the glass.                      
                                                                           
                              JOHNNY                                       
                    Hey, How’s your essay? Is that OK?                     
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    Essay? What’s that?!                                   
                                                                           
                              JOHNNY                                       
                    From last tutorial he gave us.                         
                         (shock on his face)                               
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    I gotta go now, see you later.                         
                                                                           
          Mike walks in a hurry.                                           
                                                                           
          Mike nearly crashes onto the big column.                         
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OUTSIDE THE LITMUS BUILDING - DAY                           
                                                                           
          Mike walks quickly.                                              
                                                                           
          Mike opens the door and rushes into it.                          
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. INSIDE THE LITMUS BUILDING GROUND FLOOR - DAY               
                                                                           
          Mike rushes to the second door of the building which is          
          nearly closed.                                                   
                                                                           
          The second door closes.                                          
                                                                           
          Mike crashes into the door.                                      
                                                                           
          Mike takes his key to open the door again.                       
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                  3.       
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY                                           
                                                                           
          Mike walks quickly to his computer desk and opens his            
          computer.                                                        
                                                                           
          Mike creates a new document, and he sighes.                      
                                                                           
          Mike sees his watch.                                             
                                                                           
          Mike phones his group mate Sarah.                                
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    Sarah, I need your help about my                       
                    essay. Could you come to my room?                      
                                                                           
                              SARAH                                        
                    Sure, see you in 15 mins.                              
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    See you                                                
                                                                           
          Mike breathes deeply.                                            
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. INSIDE THE LITMUS BUILDING CORRIDOR - DAY                   
                                                                           
          Sarah is walking with her portfolio                              
                                                                           
          Sarah knocks at the door.                                        
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY                                           
                                                                           
          Sarah walks in.                                                  
                                                                           
          Sarah takes a seat beside him.                                   
                                                                           
                              SARAH                                        
                    How’s going with yours                                 
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    Look. Nothing.                                         
                                                                           
                              SARAH                                        
                    Wow, it’s difficult to finish                          
                    within today.                                          
                                                                           
                    Look, I show you my structure. And                     
                    it may helps.                                          
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    Yeah, maybe.                                           
                                                                           
          Sarah inserts her Usb flashdisk into Mike’s laptop.              
                                                                           
                                                           (CONTINUED)     
                                                                           
          CONTINUED:                                              4.       
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
          Sarah opens her essay for him.                                   
                                                                           
          They discusses.                                                  
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OLD MARKET SQUARE - DAY                                     
                                                                           
          Mary stands beside the fountain with a handbag.                  
                                                                           
          Mary takes her phone from her handbag.                           
                                                                           
          Mary phones Mike                                                 
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY                                           
                                                                           
          Mike’s mobile phone is receiving a new call from Mary and        
          its screen is flashing but without any ring and vibrate.         
                                                                           
          Mike is concentrated on writing his essay with Sarah. So he      
          doesn’t see his mobile phone.                                    
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OLD MARKET SQUARE - DAY                                     
                                                                           
          Mary takes down her phone from her face and she looks her        
          mobile again and again.                                          
                                                                           
          Mary doublechecks the signal of her mobile phone.                
                                                                           
          Mary sends a text message to Mike, but still no reply.           
                                                                           
          Mary walks in a hurry.                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OUTSIDE THE LITMUS BUILDING - DAY                           
                                                                           
          Mary walks quickly.                                              
                                                                           
          Mary takes her mobile phone from her handbag and looks her       
          mobile phone again, but it’s still nothing.                      
                                                                           
          Mary gets to the door and pushes it, the door is locked.         
                                                                           
          Someone comes nearby and opens the door, Mary follows him to     
          get into the building.                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                  5.       
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY                                           
                                                                           
          Mike and Sarah are sitting together and looking some article     
          on the desk.                                                     
                                                                           
          Showing the article on the desk.                                 
                                                                           
          Mike’s head is closing to Sarah’s head.                          
                                                                           
          Mary walks into the room.                                        
                                                                           
          Mary stops and keeps remains silent.                             
                                                                           
          Mary returns back to outside the door quickly.                   
                                                                           
          The door makes a great noise.                                    
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    Oh, is the door remained unlock?                       
                                                                           
          Mike gets up to lock the door.                                   
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OUTSIDE THE LITMUS BUILDING - DAY                           
                                                                           
          Mary is walking out of the building.                             
                                                                           
          Mary uses tissue to wipe her tear on her face.                   
                                                                           
                                                                           
          INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY                                           
                                                                           
          There are 4 new calls and 3 new text messages on Mike’s          
          mobile phone.                                                    
                                                                           
          Mike takes up his mobile and opens these messages, the last      
          one displays "Break-up, don’t contact me again".                 
                                                                           
          Mike sits down and calls back Mary, but Mary rejects his         
          call again and again.                                            
                                                                           
          Mike presses his mobile phone in a hurry and sends a text        
          message to explain with Mary.                                    
                                                                           
          Mike drops down his phone to the desk, and he keeps silent       
          for a long time.                                                 
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    I have something urgent to do now                      
                    and see you next class.                                
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                           (CONTINUED)     
                                                                           
          CONTINUED:                                              6.       
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                              SARAH                                        
                    Alright, see you.                                      
                         (Sarah leaves.)                                   
                                                                           
          Mike takes his mobile phone and looks it again, but no           
          replies.                                                         
                                                                           
          Mike phones Mary again and the call is rejected by Mary          
          again.                                                           
                                                                           
          Mike turns around and rushes out the room suddenly.              
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OUTSIDE THE STAIRS OF RAILWAY STATION - DAY                 
                                                                           
          Mary opens her bag and takes out her phone, and she presses      
          her phone and rejects Mike’s call and puts it into her bag.      
          And                                                              
                                                                           
          Mary is waiting for crossing the zebra line.                     
                                                                           
          Mike hugs Mary from behind suddenly.                             
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    I’m so sorry about I didn’t see my                     
                    phone. It’s just in silent mode.                       
                                                                           
                              SARAH                                        
                         (very angry)                                      
                    How about the girl? Who’s she?!                        
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                         (pretends nothing happened)                       
                    Who?! What are you talking about?                      
                                                                           
          Sarah gets rid of Mike hardly and crosses the road.              
                                                                           
          Mike remains there and he doesn’t says anything.                 
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OUTSIDE THE BROADWAY CINEMA - DAY (FLASHFORWARD)            
                                                                           
          Mary carries her handbag and holds Mike’s hand.                  
                                                                           
          Mary takes a chocolate from her bag suddenly and stands in       
          front of Mike.                                                   
                                                                           
          Mary gives it to Mike.                                           
                                                                           
                              MARY                                         
                    Happy Valentine’s Day honey, I love                    
                    you forever.                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                           (CONTINUED)     
                                                                           
          CONTINUED:                                              7.       
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                              MIKE                                         
                    Wow thanks! I love you too, baby.                      
                                                                           
                                                                           
          EXT. OUTSIDE THE STAIRS OF RAILWAY STATION - DAY                 
                                                                           
          Mike shows frustration on his face.                              
                                                                           
          Mike leaves.                                                     
                                                                           
                                                                   END 

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