Final version of my film

This is the final version of my film, named Valentine's Day. I added all the sub-titles, soundtracks. And I changed some shots and I tried to give more angles to audiences. As for the connections, I inserted some titles between the different things, because there are no connections between the different things in the first draft, so the development of the story seems farfetched. As for the flashforward in my film, I let it appeared for three times so as to display different moods of the main actor, in the first one, I tried to display that the main actor is imaging there meeting in a happy mood; the second one is the main actor is also imaging there meeting but in an anxious mood; the third one is the main actor is still imaging there meeting but helpless is shown on his face when the story backs to the present time. And I'm not sure that whether the format of sub-titles in my film are correct or not, so if they are incorrect, I will amend them.