Thursday, 9 January 2014

Things to be improved from the first film I made

From this film, I know that the story should be greatly ordered. Because many audiences gave feedback were in similar that the story is disordered and not logical enough. And as for the flashback, there is a big problem that when Roy remembering something happened before, the shot which was changed to without Roy. It should be Roy as the eye-witness person that he can see what totally happened during that period of time.

As for the technology, I think I should make more effort on adjusting the colour, the colour is totally different between some shots because of using different cameras. And more kinds of shots like pan shot, move shot, zoom-in or zoom-out, etc. I just used steady shots in most shots. So my postproduction suffered that I don't have many shots to change, even the film can not give more information to audiences.

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